Review: ML Dumars, “A Different Way of Being”
A Different Way of Being” is a dystopian novel by Shreveport author ML Dumars that explores the struggle against an oppressive regime in a society where Empaths and individuals with telepathic abilities are persecuted. The story follows a diverse cast of characters, including Yacob Orin, Cherge Den, Paul, Je’Nea, Corben Sincera, Inja Pyr, Nedra and Selera, as they navigate the challenges a totalitarian government poses. This regime employs advanced technology like surveillance helmets and chipping devices to exert control over its citizens.
The narrative delves into themes such as resistance, the ethical use of technology, societal fear of Empaths, misuse of power and the quest for truth and freedom. As the characters confront these issues, they also grapple with personal dilemmas and the importance of unity among citizens. The story culminates with a character named Jerika Ano, who chooses to live independently outside the city’s barriers, symbolizing hope and the possibility of a life free from oppression.
The novel’s structure is complex, with flashbacks and nonlinear elements that reveal character backstories and motivations, adding suspense and depth to the narrative. It’s a tale of courage, solidarity and the enduring human spirit in the face of tyranny.
Nedra’s character arc is a testament to the power of personal conviction in the face of systemic injustice, and her decisions throughout the novel illustrate the profound impact that conflict can have on an individual’s life choices.
The novel, impressively in full form, struggles a bit with the larger world-building. The stakes, seemingly high for the main characters, are not clearly defined. There are key characters like Paul and Yacob Orin, whose backstories, if fleshed out, could’ve helped the reader understand their motivations. There is some shakiness in the pacing between chapters that would be resolved with a thoughtful edit.
In all, the book strikes a resonant chord in our contemporary moment. Nedra’s character arc is a testament to the power of personal conviction in the face of systemic injustice, and her decisions throughout the novel illustrate the profound impact that conflict can have on an individual’s life choices.